A Camel and the Sea
Riding a camel
Two baby waves roam the beach —
Dumbfounding the sea
Pleasantries
The mighty breaker
Left the beach last night — saying —
See you in the morn
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2 responses to “Haiku from the Sea Beach”
Dear Oj Da,
I am not good at Haikus but these are nice!
Dear Shail,
I am yet to write a haiku that I really felt satisfied about. Also, I prefer to stick to the classical rule, 5-7-5 syllables division for the three lines. Nowadays, at least for haikus in English, they are no longer sticking to the rule. It’s made haiku writing even more difficult. No specific rules.
oj-da