Haiku from the Sea Beach

A Camel and the Sea

Riding a camel
Two baby waves roam the beach — 
Dumbfounding the sea 


The mighty breaker
Left the beach last night — saying —
See you in the morn

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  • Shail Raghuvanshi  On August 24, 2010 at 12:56 pm

    Dear Oj Da,

    I am not good at Haikus but these are nice!

    • dipankardasgupta  On August 25, 2010 at 7:26 pm

      Dear Shail,

      I am yet to write a haiku that I really felt satisfied about. Also, I prefer to stick to the classical rule, 5-7-5 syllables division for the three lines. Nowadays, at least for haikus in English, they are no longer sticking to the rule. It’s made haiku writing even more difficult. No specific rules.


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